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Friday, 16 October 2015

Bees

Today at lunch time a Swarm of bees were building one large hive. Suddenly the bees were making another hive. I did not see the little one. I only saw the big one.
it was cool and the bell rang .So I quickly ran to class.

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  2. This is informative and great to read! Great use of the adverb suddenly! Read and edit for punctuation next time to make this better.

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  3. This is informative and great to read! Great use of the adverb suddenly! Read and edit for punctuation next time to make this better.

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